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Jan 18, 2004 13:33:50 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Jan 18, 2004 13:33:50 GMT -5
Yeah and it seems that the next chapter won't ome so soon since i'm kinda out of inspiration.
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Jan 19, 2004 9:36:04 GMT -5
Post by petitecat on Jan 19, 2004 9:36:04 GMT -5
Oh no!! But that can't be good!! What are you stuck on? I'd help but that's only if you want...but I do hope it gets sorted out soon!
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Jan 19, 2004 13:10:57 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Jan 19, 2004 13:10:57 GMT -5
welll i know what i have to write but when it comews to actually writing it...i just get stuck. The dialoque..the action.
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Jan 20, 2004 10:55:11 GMT -5
Post by petitecat on Jan 20, 2004 10:55:11 GMT -5
Ah...that happens to me too, I don't want to make it sound to unreal but then I don't want to make it sound rubbish. I'm sure you'll be fine
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Jan 20, 2004 13:22:54 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Jan 20, 2004 13:22:54 GMT -5
exactly.
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DonnaLynn
Full Mutant
Dreams are answers to questions we do not yet know how to ask...
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Jan 26, 2004 0:41:25 GMT -5
Post by DonnaLynn on Jan 26, 2004 0:41:25 GMT -5
That's interesting...that's very interesting...
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Jan 26, 2004 13:35:30 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Jan 26, 2004 13:35:30 GMT -5
I'm glad you liked it.
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Jan 28, 2004 13:10:38 GMT -5
Post by loveconquers on Jan 28, 2004 13:10:38 GMT -5
Hello! I'm just checking for an update! Hope the next chapter is coming soon, I'm anxious to read it! Thanks!!
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Jan 28, 2004 14:16:19 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Jan 28, 2004 14:16:19 GMT -5
Next chapter is in beta reading, so check back in a couple(of more) of days!!!!
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Jan 28, 2004 16:15:50 GMT -5
Post by petitecat on Jan 28, 2004 16:15:50 GMT -5
Oooh, I'm excited!! Hehe, I'll be checking! lol
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Jan 29, 2004 2:04:50 GMT -5
Post by loveconquers on Jan 29, 2004 2:04:50 GMT -5
Awesome, thank you!!
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Mayra
Junior Mutant
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Jan 29, 2004 4:29:23 GMT -5
Post by Mayra on Jan 29, 2004 4:29:23 GMT -5
I'll be ready and waiting until you post it. I know i will enjoy it like the last ones. Can't wait hope you post it really soon ;D.
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Feb 1, 2004 14:00:41 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Feb 1, 2004 14:00:41 GMT -5
Guys i think i could use a new beta reader.
But i mean someone who can say "this suks" and give reason for it. Any ofers?
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Feb 5, 2004 15:44:46 GMT -5
Post by blackpanther on Feb 5, 2004 15:44:46 GMT -5
Title: Mixed Up Author: Blackpanther Rating: PG (for now, but I’m not very good at rating stories so, if I have made a mistake then somebody tell me) Pairing: E/J and S/B Summary: Shalimar and Emma get mixed up. What happens when a new GSA starts making trouble? Disclaimer: Don’t own Mutant X, or any of it’s characters (but a girls can dream can't she?). They belong to Tribune, Fireworks and Marvel and are not related in any way with X-men. A/N: This is my first fic. Please, Please!!! Give me feedback. I’d like to thank Phactorri for reading this chapter and showing me my mistakes. But I could really really use a new beta reader. If I forget to upload e-mail me & remind to start writing again.
Chapter 3: What happened?
~The Lab~
“Shalimar you were there with Emma, when whatever happened—happened. What did happen?” Brennan asked looking confused.
“I’m not Shalimar, I’m Emma.” Emma said as the others looked at her like she came from another planet.
“Shalimar this is no time for jokes.” Jesse snapped at Shalimar. “Have you lost your mind?”
“As the matter of fact yes, she did” Emma replied ironically. Adam, Jesse and Brennan looked at Emma not believing her.
“Fine. You don’t believe me. “Emma started calmly. “Ok Jess, do you remember yesterday, right before Adam called us to the lab for the mission ….you were so unhappy or when we were in that jungle waiting for Shal & Brennan to return...the first time I realized that you loved me….and Brennan you remember when we just met and you showed me how your power works…and Adam there was that time after Ashlocke transported us back trough time, remember our talk? Shalimar couldn’t have known those things. I’m Emma!”
Jesse, Adam and Brennan looked at her like she had gone nuts. “Emma are you in there?” Jesse took a step closer to her. “Yes, I’m here Jesse.”
“But how could this have happened?” Adam asked looking very puzzled.
“I don’t know, Adam. All I know is that Shalimar went crazy back there because she was feeling all our feelings. She doesn’t know how to control my powers. If she wakes up and we’re all here she is going to go crazy.”
“Of course…along with the mind transfer the powers changed too. That electromagnetism wave that hit you two yesterday must have been the cause. You both have to learn how to control these new powers.” Adam said triumphantly as he figured out the cause of the “switch”.
Shalimar started to stir in the chair. ”She’s waking up!” Brennan announced.
“All right all of you out of the lab” Emma began pushing Adam, Brennan and Jesse towards the door. “I’ll help her get a hold of my...err…her powers”
“Oh all right…stop pushing” complained Jesse.
Shalimar opened her eyes slowly only to stare up at herself. She tried to get up but just then another wave of feelings hit her and she leaned back in the chair.
“Shalimar, it’s all right…..You have to concentrate….” Emma said as calmly as could. But Shalimar could feel she was worried.
“But it hurts….” Shalimar said in a weak voice.
“Shalimar you have to push other people’s feelings away.” Emma explained. “You thought me how to control my powers, remember?”
Shalimar closed her eyes pushing Emma’s feelings away. She slowly reopened her eyes after a short while. “I think I’m alright now. I can steel feel what you are feeling…but...it’s like you are miles away”
“That’s it! You’ve done it!!! Now let’s see if you’re ready for more feelings” Emma helped her friend stand up.
~GSA new secret headquarters~
The metal doors slided open and a tall man dressed in a black suit entered the dark room. “We had some trouble at Research center #9”
“What kind of trouble?” Asked one of the young women. She was wearing a brown suit with an over knee skirt and boots. Her dark red-hair was put up in a bun.
“Four mutants. They attacked the research center. A feral, an elemental, a psionic and a molecular. They destroyed the electromagnetism generator”
“It was Adam’s team” the other identical woman said.
“You are dismissed, Mr. Smith.” The black-haired man said. He was wearing a dark striped suit and gloves.
“Thank you Mr. Eckhart, Miss Eckhart.” The man said as he exited the room.
“Adam’s discovered us!” one of the women said.
“Calm down, Michele” she man said calmly “I don’t think he knows what’s going on. In the worst case he only suspects.”
“Yeah, but we’ll be ready for anything he throws at us. And we’re going to destroy his life little by little.” The other woman, Deidre, said.
A/N: Thank you for your great reviews!!! They make me feel realy good a bout myself. I’m repeating myself but I need a new beta reader.
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Feb 7, 2004 14:38:15 GMT -5
Post by petitecat on Feb 7, 2004 14:38:15 GMT -5
Twas brilliant! As usual, and I reviewed on ff.net too lol. Thought it might boost you up! lol hehe, well I can't wait to read more!! It's excellent!
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